cave exploring

Walt: write a detailed narrative from a sentence starter  Walt: use descriptive words to make a narrative more exciting

Once there were 2 boys named Charlie, and Dave. They had one hobby they love to do which was exploring caves. They would do almost anything to go explore caves. Their dad finally gave them the opportunity to go cave exploring.

On One saturday morning they finally got to go to caves. They got their gear for The trip. ¨Bye Dad¨ Charlie said as they walked out the door. 5 minutes later They finally got to their destination. They found the cave they wanted to go in.

BANG BANG! ¨Did You hear That??¨ Dave Nervously said with fear. Of course I did, Charlie Said. They were nervous. The sound sounded like a gunshot but not really. They stand still trying to listen.

Another One But even Louder and his also banged 4 times. BANG BANG BANG BANG. Nobody even  knew what is was. There were so Scared of the

There Was a dark shadow moving from side to side rapidly. There heart dropped Because of the speed  The shadow was moving. They thought no way that's Human or animal. They tried to escape but they were too slow.

The shadow got Closer, The sound got louder. They panicked Screamed. Dave even cried. It got even closer. The sound stopped…  MEOW! It was a Cat. Wow, Charlie said. They both felt relieved. It was so embarrassing for them. They decided to walk home and keep the story a secret. This was a day they will never forget. The End.

into the cave writing

Walt: write a narrative So they all started mining. They saw a big scorpion, and it was heading for them. Klink klink klink. The rocks started to fall on the entrance… suddenly it was dark, they couldn’t see a thing. But good thing they had a flashlight to see. So they kept mining. On one sunny thursday they went gold hunting on the scariest cave in the city. So they grabbed all the tools for gold hunting, and of they went. As soon as they arrived Lenkin started to mine. “Come on brothers let’s start mining” excitingly said Lenkin.Once there were three hunter’s called lenkin,julian , and jessie. They are bothers, and they loved to hunt for gold in all different kinds of  cave’s. They have all the tools they needed.

A few minutes later they heard something. Hkkk hkkk!. “What was that” nervously said lenkin. “ its its its a spider!!!” shouted lenkin . So they started to chop it with a pickaxe. It was getting hurt. Three more hits until it's dead so they kept hitting it hitting it.

So they killed the spider. They had an idea.

“ what if we mine the rocks and get out of here!” Mysteriously said julian. They started to  mine the rocks out of their way. So they decided to leave the cave and go home.

As soon as they arrived at home. they  sadly thought they would never go gold hunting for ever in their lives

TASK DESCRIPTION: we wrote a story of what will happen in this cave. we got to write this hole story in 40 mins.

THE END OF THE STORY

Kruz if I were a athlete writing.olympics

Walt: use a plan when writing.

It is Monday July the 25th today. In 2 weeks time I will competing for the Rio 2016 Olympics. The , and I have been training for 4 years you might be thinking that's false, but it's true. This is the moment when I get that gold medal. I'm trying to be the best in the competition.

I will be competing in running the 100m hurdle jump, hurdles are when you have to run as fast as a cheater and leap over the little fences called hurdles. I will be running because I’m fast, and I can jump high. I really want to be the fastest in the race. I was training for 4 years so I want to see if that really paid of.

I am representing New Zealand Because I was born in here, and I'm also a kiwi. Last year So I will make this country proud this year. Last year I wasn't as tough, but this year you know what? I will be better than before. New Zealand is one of the coolest countries in the Rio 2016 Olympics.

I feel excited and a little bit nervous because I'v never been watched by the crowed before. But I’m Determined to be the winner of Rio 2016 Olympic. I'm more excited than nervous, because  i’ll be fine. I will try my best to get more than one gold medal. I also think I can train some more.

I'm really really looking forward to competing in the Olympics. This is my chance to beat the fastest guy in the competition.  

task description:We were planning our writing before we wrote.

the link if you want to do this

If I was an Olympic athlete - Google Docs

Kruz Setting Descriptions

Walt: write a setting description. Task description: I descried These setting with vocab to make more details

Year 5 and 6 camp

Walt: organise my ideas into paragraphs and link them together.

In week 8 Team 4 had camp at pt england school. All of the tents were on the school field. They were 5 groups with name that has the word kind in it,and My group name was the Kind Kings.

All the teams did a activity with their teachers.My favorite activity was building a fire with Matua Willis helped us while the girls bake cookies. When we Built the fire We needed Dead grass,and twigs.

Matua Willis had matches so he lighted the fire up and the fire started. After that it was morning tea time.

For dinner we had nachos white mince and cheese and sour cream. After dinner we wash our own dishes. Then we had spare time to practice our dance for the concert.But after that every camp group watched Hotel Transylvania.  

We went to be bed. I slept with Talaloa,and Nytram.In the middle of the night talaloas dad woke us up because there was a big storm,So we had to sleep in the library.

We had our concert on day 2 of camp. All the parents and kids were watching us. It took a while Suddenly it was the Kind Kings to dance I felt really nervous.

On the last day went to the swimming pool.

kruz Narrative Writing First go

My story

Start writing here:  There was a talking fish that named Milo. Milo is 6 years old.Milo always wanted to meet his favorite hero's called Nature Man fish and Nature Man fish`s pet snake called Nature snake. They  .He lives in a normal fish tank and He lives in fish tank. He has a best friend called Daniell. He goes to a school called tank fishery school and a teacher named Mrs Baker. One day Milo woke up in the morning to get ready for school. He rode his bike to school. He sat on his desk table to learn. Milo realized a big crack  in school. The pieces of the school ground were falling apart.

Milo was freaking out ‘a crack in the school aaaahhhh!!!!.

Milo nearly fell out but Daniel grab his hand. They both ran outside for help then they the cl-ambulance. The cl-ambulance came and tried to cover the floor white clams and super glue that never comes off. But the clams kept on falling.

“If only nature man fish came’’. Milo said

“Did someone say nature man fish’’

“It's OK kids I`v got this.

‘’. Milo could`not believe what he was seeing.

“Hi, Hi, Hi, Nature Boy Fish and Nature Snake.

“Not now kid.

Nature man fish grabbed Nature Snake and saved the school. Then Milo could not believe what he was seeing. All the kids clapped for Nature man fish and Nature snake.

“Nature man fish’’

“Nature snake”

School ended, So Milo, and Nature man fish,Nature snake grabbed a cup of tea and went to Milo`s house.                                   THE END

Walt: understand the features of narrative writing
My story - Google Docs