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Tuesday, 23 February 2016

short story


Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Start Writing here: Once upon a time there was a Gingerbread man named Chip. He has short hair with long arms and long legs. He loves going swimming in the pools,thats really deep.

One morning Chip got home from the pools,and went for a wash in the shower. after he showered he got changed, and decided to go shopping at Pak n save. So he hopped inside the car.

Chip Went inside the shop He buyed Some bread. But some how a Whale came out of nowhere,and swallowed Chip.Chip Was screaming out
“help!
But nobody heard him. He started to get tired,and laid on the heart while watching other people get swallowed. Chip was talking about getting swallowed,and made up a plan!.

So while they were talking the whale started to shake,and everybody in the whale were flying all over the place. The whale stopped and Chip had a good plan. He was thinking of tickling the the whale. Chip called everyone,and they all listened to Chip. Chip explained his idea to everyone so they started tickling,and the whale started shaking.

The plan wasn't working so everyone was stuck. Chip felt very very hungry,and his stomach was rumbling.Chip saw tons of fish flying inside of the mouth.Chip was starving,so he wate all the fish but he didn't share. everyone was very mad that they started tickling for 15 mins, and the whale spit everyone out and they got free.  
    
  
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          THE.END!

Thursday, 18 February 2016

Tuesday, 16 February 2016

kruz Narrative Writing First go

My story
Start writing here:  There was a talking fish that named Milo. Milo is 6 years old.Milo always wanted to meet his favorite hero's called Nature Man fish and Nature Man fish`s pet snake called Nature snake. They  .He lives in a normal fish tank and He lives in fish tank. He has a best friend called Daniell. He goes to a school called tank fishery school and a teacher named Mrs Baker. One day Milo woke up in the morning to get ready for school. He rode his bike to school. He sat on his desk table to learn. Milo realized a big crack  in school. The pieces of the school ground were falling apart.
Milo was freaking out ‘a crack in the school aaaahhhh!!!!.
Milo nearly fell out but Daniel grab his hand. They both ran outside for help then they the cl-ambulance. The cl-ambulance came and tried to cover the floor white clams and super glue that never comes off. But the clams kept on falling.
“If only nature man fish came’’. Milo said
“Did someone say nature man fish’’
“It's OK kids I`v got this.
‘’. Milo could`not believe what he was seeing.
“Hi, Hi, Hi, Nature Boy Fish and Nature Snake.
“Not now kid.
Nature man fish grabbed Nature Snake and saved the school. Then Milo could not believe what he was seeing. All the kids clapped for Nature man fish and Nature snake.
“Nature man fish’’
“Nature snake”
School ended, So Milo, and Nature man fish,Nature snake grabbed a cup of tea and went to Milo`s house.                                   THE END


Walt: understand the features of narrative writing
My story - Google Docs

Friday, 12 February 2016

kruzes advice blog


Walt: follow instructions and present work to a high standard.

Thursday, 4 February 2016

Math Problem Solving


Walt: solve addition & subtraction problems using a range of strategies.