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Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts

Wednesday, 1 May 2019

Little red riding hood.


 Once upon a time there lived a little girl. Her mother had a little red riding hood made for her. Everybody called her Little Red Riding Hood. One day her mother said to her “Go and see how your grandmother is doing, because she has been very ill.” Little Red Riding Hood went out immediately. As she was going through the wood, she met with a wolf. He asked her where she was going. “I am going to see my grandmother.” “Does she live far off?” said the wolf. “It is near that tree is you see there”. It was not long before the wolf arrived at the grandmas house. He knocked at the door. Tap, tap, tap. “Who’s there?” “Your grandchild, Little Red Riding Hood,” said the wolf, But the wolf was actually faking it The grandmother called out, “Pull the string, and the latch will go up.” The wolf pulled the string and the door opened, and then he immediately fell upon the good woman and ate her up in a moment. He then shut the door and got into the grandmother’s bed, expecting Little Red Riding Hood, who came some time afterwards and knocked at the door. Tap, tap, tap. “Who’s there?” “It is your grandchild, Little Red Riding Hood.” The wolf cried out, “Pull the string, and the latch will go up.” Little Red Riding Hood pulled the string, and the door opened. “Grandmother, what big arms you have!” “Grandmother, what big ears you have!” “Grandmother, what big eyes you have!” “Grandmother, what big teeth you have got!” “All the better to eat you up with.” Fortunately, a hunter was passing nearby the hut. He heard the wolf, and recognised him right away. He ran over to the window. He took a good aim, and that was the end of the wolf.

Monday, 14 November 2016

Thursday, 28 July 2016

Kruz if I were a athlete writing.olympics










Walt: use a plan when writing.
It is Monday July the 25th today. In 2 weeks time I will competing for the Rio 2016 Olympics. The , and I have been training for 4 years you might be thinking that's false, but it's true. This is the moment when I get that gold medal. I'm trying to be the best in the competition.

I will be competing in running the 100m hurdle jump, hurdles are when you have to run as fast as a cheater and leap over the little fences called hurdles. I will be running because I’m fast, and I can jump high. I really want to be the fastest in the race. I was training for 4 years so I want to see if that really paid of.

I am representing New Zealand Because I was born in here, and I'm also a kiwi. Last year So I will make this country proud this year. Last year I wasn't as tough, but this year you know what? I will be better than before. New Zealand is one of the coolest countries in the Rio 2016 Olympics.

I feel excited and a little bit nervous because I'v never been watched by the crowed before. But I’m Determined to be the winner of Rio 2016 Olympic. I'm more excited than nervous, because  i’ll be fine. I will try my best to get more than one gold medal. I also think I can train some more.

I'm really really looking forward to competing in the Olympics. This is my chance to beat the fastest guy in the competition.  



task description:We were planning our writing before we wrote.


the link if you want to do this

Tuesday, 23 February 2016

short story


Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Start Writing here: Once upon a time there was a Gingerbread man named Chip. He has short hair with long arms and long legs. He loves going swimming in the pools,thats really deep.

One morning Chip got home from the pools,and went for a wash in the shower. after he showered he got changed, and decided to go shopping at Pak n save. So he hopped inside the car.

Chip Went inside the shop He buyed Some bread. But some how a Whale came out of nowhere,and swallowed Chip.Chip Was screaming out
“help!
But nobody heard him. He started to get tired,and laid on the heart while watching other people get swallowed. Chip was talking about getting swallowed,and made up a plan!.

So while they were talking the whale started to shake,and everybody in the whale were flying all over the place. The whale stopped and Chip had a good plan. He was thinking of tickling the the whale. Chip called everyone,and they all listened to Chip. Chip explained his idea to everyone so they started tickling,and the whale started shaking.

The plan wasn't working so everyone was stuck. Chip felt very very hungry,and his stomach was rumbling.Chip saw tons of fish flying inside of the mouth.Chip was starving,so he wate all the fish but he didn't share. everyone was very mad that they started tickling for 15 mins, and the whale spit everyone out and they got free.  
    
  
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