Tuesday, 16 February 2016

kruz Narrative Writing First go

My story
Start writing here:  There was a talking fish that named Milo. Milo is 6 years old.Milo always wanted to meet his favorite hero's called Nature Man fish and Nature Man fish`s pet snake called Nature snake. They  .He lives in a normal fish tank and He lives in fish tank. He has a best friend called Daniell. He goes to a school called tank fishery school and a teacher named Mrs Baker. One day Milo woke up in the morning to get ready for school. He rode his bike to school. He sat on his desk table to learn. Milo realized a big crack  in school. The pieces of the school ground were falling apart.
Milo was freaking out ‘a crack in the school aaaahhhh!!!!.
Milo nearly fell out but Daniel grab his hand. They both ran outside for help then they the cl-ambulance. The cl-ambulance came and tried to cover the floor white clams and super glue that never comes off. But the clams kept on falling.
“If only nature man fish came’’. Milo said
“Did someone say nature man fish’’
“It's OK kids I`v got this.
‘’. Milo could`not believe what he was seeing.
“Hi, Hi, Hi, Nature Boy Fish and Nature Snake.
“Not now kid.
Nature man fish grabbed Nature Snake and saved the school. Then Milo could not believe what he was seeing. All the kids clapped for Nature man fish and Nature snake.
“Nature man fish’’
“Nature snake”
School ended, So Milo, and Nature man fish,Nature snake grabbed a cup of tea and went to Milo`s house.                                   THE END

Walt: understand the features of narrative writing
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