Wednesday, 14 June 2017

Can He Save Him

WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

Once upon a time there was a man named Jack. He works for 12 hours every single day.  He loved this superhero called Spiderman. He didn't know spiderman was bad but he was.

One day at work Jack was minding his own business when Spiderman came wandering in. Jack was so shocked he didn't know Spiderman was real. But little did he know spiderman was bad.

Iron man was looking at them from on top of a building. Iron man saw no good in Spiderman and was worried for Jack. Spider Man was threatening to push Jack off the sky tower. Jack couldn't believe what he saw. He was so scared that he cried out “HELP ME!”

Suddenly Jack just didn't care anymore, he couldn't take it any longer. Spiderman gave Jack a mighty push out the window. Jack was falling down so fast. Iron man came to pick him up. He was going too fast for Iron man to catch him. Iron man had to use all his speed to catch jack.

Jack was going to hit the ground. Iron man just caught him in time. Luckily for Jack he was saved by Iron man just before he was going to hit the ground. Jack was so pleased, he couldn't thank iron man enough.

Spiderman got scared and ran off to his house. Iron man got some food to eat with Jack. The day ended of well with laughing and smiling. Jack and spider man lived happily ever after the end.

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